Tuesday, September 6, 2011

A Little Rhyme

We have seen that in literature there are different genres where creators find their way of expressing feelings or ideas.
Fables, short stories, novels, fairy tales.
We tried writing some poems on Monday.

The formats came from this link http://ettcweb.lr.k12.nj.us/forms/newpoem.htm

And poems can also turn into songs, and as we have a gifted musician we want to share the following:
(This is the latest version)

Once upon a time
I caught a little rhyme
I set it in the brightest light
but it
flew out of my sight
I chased it all over the bar
but it
wasn´t very smart
I scooped it round the ice
but
got lost through my eyes
I caught it in a song
but it
seemed to be all wrong
# I followed it round the world
but it
turned into a curl
When I fed it with a spoon
it became
a blue lagoon

# I followed it round the world
but it
turned into a curl
When I fed it with a spoon
it became a blue lagoon
Then it grew into a kite
and flew far out of sight...



"A Little Rhyme", lyrics GROUP 512, music Joaquín.
Yes!! we will include the music too!!!
Soon we will have our first recording!!!!!!!!!!!!

5 comments:

  1. Hi!

    I think the lyrics is OK. But I am not really sure...Perla

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  2. Hi group!...mmm...I agree with Perla, because I copied the lyrics in my notebook...and I checked it...and it's correct. It was very funny...greetings

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  3. Hi! My favorite phrase is: "I chased it all over the bar but it wasn´t very smart", It's an interesting lyrics, and I think it´s correct.

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  4. hi teacher good afternoon.. I want to tell you that I have sobre problems in my job so it´s impossible for me to arrive to the class today.. I don´t have your e-mail so I couldn´t tell you earlier. Sorry I`ll see you tomorrow nice evening. Denisse

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  5. If I have the chance of two lives I be back to do the same all over again, for examples this Friday are coming my angels and demons to a party and in a few weeks with my clan I will jumped in a parachute and I recomended that we do at night because the feeling of that will be deeperrrr!!!!!

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